Sunday, 23 August 2015

Descriptive Writing

We gave been learning how to use precise adjectives and figurative language in our Science Fiction writing. We used a video clip" Lifted" for class motivation  with our shared writing.
Here are a few examples of our work. Can you identify our different types of figurative language we used?
" One dark gloomy night in the countryside a house stood in the middle of nowhere..." by Ariyan.

" A windmill stood like a Queen's guard silent in the night" by Sophie

" The little creature looked like forest green jelly with a transmitter on his head" by Nathan.

"On a dark eerie night the moon shines brightly.  One lonely farmhouse gleams brightly in the deserted countryside" by Yvonne.

"Inside the Intergalactic UFO was a small, slimy green creature, stretching out his long green tentacles pushing buttons" by Ryan.

"Inside the house the farmer was being boinging around like a ping pong ball" by India.

" Inside the unidentified flying object was a small green alien that had fingers like tentacles. The peculiar creature has a snail helmet on his head and poking out the top an antennae"  by Max.

"The unsuccessful alien had an army of switches all around him" by Lara.

" Everyone of his attempts was useless. He got as angry as a roaring tiger" by Oliver.

"He was like a bull in a china shop crashing into everything" by Lucy.
"The fat blob of slime was not impressed with the alien's skills. His face was expressionless." by Nisha.

"Zing !Zing !Zing ! An alien spaceship shone a blue light on the farmhouse making look like it was full of blue fire" by Ethan J.

"Lights up the whole house like fireworks" by Caleb .

"The blue light had this mysterious power which can control gravity and was able to float the farmer out of his bed" by Janel.

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